Episode 437

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Episode 437

Postby jaasak » Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:35 pm

I think our lovely Swedish girl’s been savvy to Inspector Scott & saw/heard something that made her warn poor hapless Mr. Murdock.
Oh boy......
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Re: Episode 437

Postby ewaggin » Thu Oct 19, 2017 1:18 am

In the last sentence of Paragraph 2, "bother" should be "bothered".

Paul, I should mention that I greatly enjoy the Flying Cloud saga, and I am impressed by your dedication to sharing the story with us readers. These extremely minor faux pas that I've been pointing out are in no way intended as criticism. I have an eye for this sort of thing (perhaps I was a proofreader in a former life <grin>).
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Re: Episode 437

Postby PaulGazis » Tue Oct 24, 2017 10:12 pm

Comments, corrections, questions, suggestions, and... dare I say it... criticisms are very much welcome! Provided no one makes fun of Helga or Sarah, both of whom have melee weapons and know how to use them :)

The way I see it, this saga owes everything to the readers who enjoy it, keep it honest, and catch those all-important details like... um... err... having the Moon orbit the Earth backwards, or getting Fenwick's name wrong for several episodes. Darn it.
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